tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1632426800216083502.post7537014513219205942..comments2016-10-08T16:42:19.109-07:00Comments on Eric: A moment in timeRoom6http://www.blogger.com/profile/05838634600740030691noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1632426800216083502.post-59595813367999784342016-08-27T12:45:26.212-07:002016-08-27T12:45:26.212-07:00This is creative writing Eric. I like how you used...This is creative writing Eric. I like how you used your senses to describe what it is like in the rain. You have used 'shivering' twice. Is there a different word you could use?Room6https://www.blogger.com/profile/05838634600740030691noreply@blogger.com